So a long time ago I posted the first page of this comic here. I got busy with other stuff and wasn't really happy with how that page turned out, I left it to ruminate for awhile. So I flipped some stuff around and decided to try it out this way. I still have one more page in this little segment of a much larger story and I may take another left turn with that - these are sort of my process testers for when I go full bore into this. All feedback is welcome, after awhile it gets hard to tell what's working and what's not!