It's a beauty! Congrats, man I love the style and texture. My one suggestion, on page 3, would be to use "they were wrong" instead of "they're wrong" Generally a good idea to stay away from the conjunction junction. Or not what do I know?That's the one thing I remember from high school English class.Either way, I'll still read the book.
Great job, Chris.. I love it !!You should put in on Blurb.com and sell your book online !Anyway.. can't wait to see Gus again and I hope he is not grumpy anymore... ;p